You see, it is hard for me to get into the personal journeys and friendships when I find the writing to be dough-ish and I seem to have problems with the plot.This just distracts me from immersion in the story. I keep thinking "Oh, i rememebr this from so-and-so:, or "this is a strange turn of phrase" and can not immerse.
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Date: 2011-07-17 10:38 am (UTC)